Some of us write in a
kind of stream of consciousness way. Some of us plot. Some of us outline. Some
of us have an idea that writes itself.
We all must find a way of
coming to an end: one that is appropriate, comes at the right time, is both
logical and emotional so that the reader puts the book down with a feeling of
satisfaction.
None of us want to hear
that our ending was disappointing, unless that disappointment is because they
wanted the story to go on and on.
One of the most iconic
endings was written in a novel published on June 30, 1936 and very quickly
became the most quoted ending for decades to come at the end of a novel 1037
pages long.
“After
all, tomorrow is another day.” (Gone with
the Wind)
This is the only ending
completely suitable for this book, because the readers know this heroine very, very well and are assured that yes, one
day, she will get him back.
However,
this open, promissory ending has the drawback of inviting others to continue
the story to suit their own wishes. The Margaret Mitchell Trust has only
ever authorized one sequel, Rhett’s
People, but all potential sequels pale in comparison to MM’s achievement.
Many of the best endings
are in the classics, both modern and ancients. Here is the ending of one of my
favorite books by American author, Anne Tyler:
“…She
was frantically waving down taxis—first the one ahead, then Macon’s own. ‘Arrêtez!’ Macon dried to the driver. The
taxi lurched to a halt. A sudden flash of sunlight hit the windshield, and
spangles flew across the glass. The spangles were old water spots, or maybe the
markings of leaves, but for a moment Macon thought they were something else.
They were so bright and festive, for a moment he thought they were confetti.” (The Accidental Tourist)
And the ending by a
much-acclaimed author, Gabriel Garcia Márquez:
“Florentino
Ariza had kept his answer ready for fifty-three years, seven months, and eleven
days and nights.
“‘Forever,’
he said.” (Love in the Time of Cholera)
Some endings
intentionally leave you wanting more, particularly if they are part of a series
but cliff-hanger ending are best left to chapters in a single book, not a
series that requires a purchase—being left in the lurch or forced to buy is not
necessarily pleasant.
As in Gone with the Wind, a novel that ends
leaving us wanting the story to go on can lead to “fan fiction.” Whether that
is a good thing is a matter of personal choice and taste.
If for any reason, an
ending cannot be found that is satisfactory, some writers (and script writers
as well) used the epilogue. Like the prologue, the epilogue serves a
purpose—the device can cut off any further speculation in the same way that a
prologue sets the stage before the story begins. These address backstory and
closure but, as Elmore Leonard said,
“Avoid
prologues.” (10 Rules of Writing)
I extend that admonition
to ‘Avoid epilogues’ as well. If we’re writing a series (or think a book may
become a series), an ending can keep that door open as well as close the
chapter on that particular story without leaving us with the sensation something
is missing.
Or an ending, a final
sentence or paragraph
·
Ties everything
up
·
Brings all
the pieces together
·
Clears up the
mystery
·
Identifies the
culprit
·
Puts all
characters at peace
·
Or leaves all
possibilities on the table.
Although the total of the
reading experience is the ultimate determinant, we still want the final word to
linger and resonate, not as an ending, a finality, but as a promise of forever,
hope.
Hi Leigh--
ReplyDeleteNice post about endings and reader satisfaction. I agree with your final comment, "want the final word to linger and resonate" that is what I hope to find, and in the case of romance... I want the happy or hopeful ending. A terrible ending ruins the book for me.
Victoria--
Thank you, Victoria. Definitely, happy or at the least hopeful.
DeleteI love your examples of satisfying endings. I'd forgotten the ending to Accidental Tourist, but it's, like so much of Ann Tyler's work, just right.
ReplyDeleteDeborah, it's great to find another Anne Tyler fan. I think The Accidental Tourist is my favorite of all her books. Thank you for commenting.
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